Friday, June 23, 2023

Natural Beauty (subtitled) ¨We talking waves or particles?¨

 

 

A fresh teenaged girl walking

with her little sister in hand,

both smiling sweetly,

beautifully alive.

 

I could not add anything

to that tableaux, I would not

change it in any way.

 

I did smile in their general

direction.

 

 

Addendum

 

If I was a jerk poet, I would have titled

the poem:

¨Mundane Quantum of Beauty¨

or,

¨Mundane Beauty Quantum¨

¨Quantum Beauty Moment¨

¨Quanta of Beauty¨

just to stick that word “quantum¨

in there, somewhere, because it´s

such a hip cliché throw away phrase

these days, I thought I´d throw it into

the poem to make it more groovy.

But, it didn´t.

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