Natural Beauty (subtitled) ¨We talking waves or particles?¨
A fresh teenaged girl walking
with her little sister in hand,
both smiling sweetly,
beautifully alive.
I could not add anything
to that tableaux, I would not
change it in any way.
I did smile in their general
direction.
Addendum
If I was a jerk poet, I would have titled
the poem:
¨Mundane Quantum of Beauty¨
or,
¨Mundane Beauty Quantum¨
¨Quantum Beauty Moment¨
¨Quanta of Beauty¨
just to stick that word “quantum¨
in there, somewhere, because it´s
such a hip cliché throw away phrase
these days, I thought I´d throw it into
the poem to make it more groovy.
But, it didn´t.
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